this is what i started but then i redid it to the other one i got.
Beware
Chapter 1

The other wolves were howling around me. The wind rushing through my thick black fur. My pack and I were running a crossed the south Texans plans.

“We’ll rest up there!” I yelled.

They all yowled in agreement. It was dawn, and it was also a long climb up to the mouth of the cave.

“Star we are all hungry.” Said my best friend fang.
“I know fang, go and get lupus and willow.” I said to him.
“Yes, star.”

“What do you want us to do?” questioned lupus
“I need you and willow to go and get prey for all of us.” I said sternly
“Yes star.” He said politely but arrogantly

My pack and I are strong but not as strong as the black paw pack. They are the toughest out of all of us. When I say all I mean all 18 packs. The black paw pack has everything like we do. I have 5 hunters, 6 babysitters, 19 worriers, and 1 deputy, which is my most trusted friend fang.

“Fang!” I yelled.
“Yes star?” he said abruptly.
“We need to start on the new pups.” I said.
“What do you mean?” he questioned me.
“I mean on there training.” I said annoyed.
“Okay when do you plan making this happen?” he asked.
“I don’t know I will think of when then I will tell you.” I said to him.

My thoughts were interrupted by a howl from one of my daughters. I spun around so fast I almost knocked fang off his paws. When I could see the mouth of the cave, there was lupus limping in. His shoulder was soaked from blood and water.

“You need to lie down lupus.” I ordered.
“Thanks star.” He said tiredly.
“Lupus what happened.” I asked.
“Willow is coming with the food.” He said.
“What happened to you?” I asked again.
“We were taking down this huge bull elk. I jumped onto its back and bit into the neck. Then I let go. I went to get off the back but when I did his head and my shoulder and his antler collided. And his antler tip hit me in the shoulder.” He said.
“Wild!” I yelled.
“Yes star?” he said.
“Get some cob webs from outside and I you see willow go and help her after you have given me the cob webs.” I said.
“Okay star.” He said.

Wild came back with the cob webs. I laired the cob webs on lupus’s shoulder. He yowled with pain as each cob webs was laired on his shoulder.
“Did you see willow?” I asked
“Yes I did.” He said back.
“Then why are you not helping her!” I said with anger.
“Because she didn’t want help. I went down there after I got the cobwebs.” He said very quietly.
“Oh sorry for yelling.” I said feeling really bad.
“I understand.” He said

All of a sudden there was a crack of thunder and then the flashing lights of lightning. Then the rain came down so hard that visibility was zero. Then there was willow with the food. Lupus was right this elk was huge.

“Good job both of you.” I praised them
“Thanks.” They said together
“Star!”

I turned around to see how called my name.

“Blaze?”
“Star you haven’t changed one bit scene the last time I saw you.”
“Well you were always a jerk of a brother.”
“Yep and you were always a goody good.”
“Why are you here? I thought I banished you from the pack.”
“Maybe.”

I started to circle him.

“Do you remember why I banished you?”
“Yes I do.”
“You’re the reason why mom and dad are dead.”
“Well duh.”
“Don’t get smart with me, you murderer!”

By now my claws were digging into the ground.